Ela Vansteenwyk
Saturday, August 6, 2011
Rate my rap please!!!?
Decent, there is absolutely no meaning behind it obviously. But for a basic rhyming rap it is good. In the 3rd to last line take out "some" before seagulls, it just messes up the timing, atleast it did when I sung it out.
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